Wow, this one took me a day to finish... Very interesting story, on moments very hot, on some other quite sick actually.. Anyway I would LOVE to see it in a movie, even a trashier one, just to see sexy Nick in his hot outfits, enraging he's friends and arousing all the other people around him...
Thanks for sharing man!
quite an interresting story, could be more of a movie script in some way. It could
have been written better for that, if done more research, but the actual message
got through.
Although i got aroused within some parts in the story, i read it as a psychological
drama. It shows the mind of human being. Mind control does exist, and it is in
human's nature to control other humans in generel. We are the smartest living being
on this planet. We control different then animals, much more sophisticated and evolved.
The spandex involving in this story, is not that relevant, but the mind of the human
being is. When does it become an obsession, an addiction? How far does somebody go to
satisfy or feed his "needs"?
That's what got me hooked to read to the end. See in real world, and do some research
about mind control, governements and media do it all the time. example; soldiers have
been manipulated before. Conditioning and sometimes with drugs enhancement.
regards, cyclefun